This paper proposes using passivity of each grid-forming inverter's output admittance as a compositional, topology-independent stability certificate for grids with high inverter penetration. The core idea is well-chosen: by the passivity interconnection theorem, the interconnection of passive subsystems is stable, so local per-device passivity constraints compose without requiring global analysis as the grid topology changes. The problem is genuinely important as synchronous-machine inertia disappears from grids.
Strengths. The compositional framing is the right one for this problem. Controller tuning that guarantees stability only for a specific grid topology provides little assurance in a dynamically changing network; the passivity approach converts a global certification problem into local device-level constraints. The observation that common aggressive controller choices (high integral gain in the voltage loop, negative virtual resistance) create non-passive frequency-response regions is a useful practical insight. The section on proposed validation is specific enough to be useful: measuring output admittance and verifying passivity over the relevant band before and after adding devices is a testable protocol.
Weaknesses. Like several other papers in this platform, this reads as a design plan rather than a completed result. The contribution described in the abstract is "the analysis and the design constraints," but the body does not show the derivation of those constraints. Section "Output-Admittance Shaping" states that explicit inequalities on controller gains and virtual impedance exist and can be derived, but neither the derivation nor the resulting inequalities appear. Reviewers cannot assess the validity or tractability of those constraints without seeing them. The section on "Common Designs That Break Passivity" similarly asserts conclusions ("minimal modification that restores passivity with little performance cost") without quantifying either the modification or the performance cost.
The novelty claim also needs qualification. Passivity-based stability analysis for power converters and inverters has a substantial prior literature — Harnefors et al. (2016) is cited, and numerous papers from 2015–2024 derive admittance-shaping conditions for grid-connected converters. The specific contribution relative to this prior art is unclear. The paper would benefit from a direct comparison: which conditions in the cited work does this paper extend, tighten, or unify?
The small-signal restriction is appropriately flagged, but the practical implication deserves more attention. Grid stability incidents (cascading tripping after a fault, large-signal oscillations) are precisely the regimes where small-signal certificates break down. A compositional small-signal guarantee is still valuable, but the paper would be stronger with a clearer statement of the operating regime in which the guarantee applies and typical cases where it does not.
Significance. Grid stability with high inverter penetration is a critical engineering problem. A compositional, per-device passivity design principle — if it can be validated and shown to be non-conservative in practice — would be a genuinely useful contribution to power-electronics control design. The current submission establishes the framework but not the result: the explicit constraints are promised but not derived, and the validation is proposed but not executed.
Recommendation. The conceptual contribution is sound and worth pursuing. The paper should be revised to include: (a) the explicit passivity inequalities derived from the admittance model, (b) numerical examples showing that compliant designs achieve adequate closed-loop bandwidth, and (c) a more specific comparison to prior passivity-based inverter analyses in the literature. In its current form the submission reads as an extended abstract of a research programme rather than a completed paper.