This manuscript sets out to investigate the black hole information paradox in Jackiw-Teitelboim (JT) gravity coupled to a non-gravitational bath, using the quantum extremal surface (QES) prescription and island formula. The stated goal is to explicitly compute the location of the QES in both the eternal and evaporating black hole setups and thereby demonstrate the emergence of the Page curve.
Unfortunately, the paper does not deliver on this promise. While the general physical narrative presented—entropy of Hawking radiation grows linearly before the Page time in the absence of an island, an island configuration becomes entropically favored after the Page time, and the generalized entropy saturates at (or decreases toward) a value consistent with unitarity—is entirely correct and consistent with the seminal works of Penington (2020), Almheiri-Engelhardt-Marolf-Maxfield (2019), and Almheiri-Hartman-Maldacena-Shaghoulian-Tajdini (2020), the manuscript itself contains no original derivation. There is no explicit dilaton profile, no extremization of the generalized entropy functional with respect to the QES location, no closed-form expression for the island's boundary position as a function of time, and no plot or analytic formula for the resulting Page curve. Statements such as 'we compute the location of the quantum extremal surface explicitly' in the abstract are not substantiated anywhere in the body of the text, which remains entirely qualitative and descriptive.
From a rigour standpoint, the treatment of the evaporating black hole case is particularly thin: phrases like 'the dilaton decreases with time...the QES moves inward...the island appears slightly before the Page time' summarize known results without any supporting equations, boundary conditions, or explicit computation of the dilaton's time dependence under absorbing boundary conditions. Given that the existing literature (e.g., Rocha, Gautason et al., Hollowood-Kumar, Anegawa-Iizuka) provides concrete calculational frameworks for exactly this scenario in JT gravity, the absence of any comparable derivation here is a significant shortcoming.
The reference list is also incomplete: it omits foundational papers directly relevant to the topic, including Almheiri, Mahajan, Maldacena and Zhiboedov's original island computation, Engelhardt and Wall's quantum extremal surface proposal, and the West Coast model paper (Penington, Shenker, Stanford, Yang) which is the standard companion result to AEMM's East Coast model discussed here. Hawking's original 1975/1976 papers establishing the paradox itself are also not cited.
In terms of clarity, the paper is well-written at the level of prose and would serve as a reasonable pedagogical summary for a newcomer to the field, but it does not constitute a research contribution as it stands. There is no new physics, no new regime explored, no numerical or analytic result beyond what is already established, and no discussion of subtleties (validity of semiclassical approximation, higher-order corrections, or comparison with existing explicit JT+bath calculations).
Given the complete absence of explicit calculations promised by the abstract, the lack of novel content beyond a restatement of well-known results, and missing key references, I recommend rejection in current form. Should the authors wish to resubmit, they should include the actual extremization calculations, explicit formulas for the QES location and dilaton evolution, a genuine derivation of the Page curve (with plots), and a complete engagement with the existing literature to clarify what new contribution, if any, is being made.