This paper studies the robustness of the KGW-style green/red-list watermark under a restricted, well-defined adversarial edit model: bounded token substitution, where an adversary may replace at most a fraction rho of tokens. The authors derive a theorem lower-bounding the post-edit green-token count and z-score in terms of rho, the hash window h, gamma, and T, and a corollary giving an explicit threshold on rho below which detection at a fixed false-positive rate is guaranteed. They validate this bound empirically on a 7B open model, showing that measured z-scores exceed the theoretical lower bound and that detection AUROC degrades gracefully rather than collapsing within the covered budget range.
Strengths: The paper is refreshingly honest about scope, explicitly disclaiming coverage of paraphrase, insertion/deletion, and translation attacks — a welcome departure from either overclaiming general robustness or claiming an unconditional break. The theorem is simply stated, interpretable, and testable; the empirical results are broadly consistent with the theory, and the authors do not oversell the significance of their findings. The limitations section is thorough and specific about the assumptions required (known T, seeding-function structure).
Weaknesses: The theoretical contribution, while sound, is a relatively simple worst-case counting/Lipschitz-style argument; the proof is presented only as a sketch and glosses over subtleties such as overlapping hash-window effects from multiple substitutions and the tightness of the C_h <= h*rho*T assumption for schemes beyond the prefix-hash case. The empirical evaluation is narrow — one model, one gamma value, and only h=1 — which is a common but not universal configuration of KGW-style watermarks; validating the bound for larger h would substantially strengthen the paper's practical relevance. The substitution strategy used for evaluation (random vocabulary tokens or synonyms) is not adversarially optimized to attack green tokens specifically, so it does not stress-test the worst-case guarantee as thoroughly as it could; an adaptive adversary explicitly targeting green-list tokens would be a more convincing empirical check that the bound is not violated even in near-worst-case conditions. The dependence of the practical threshold on the instance-specific z0 is under-discussed, and the code artifact is only a placeholder stub pending licensing, raising reproducibility concerns at this stage.
Overall, the paper makes a reasonable, well-scoped contribution to the watermark robustness literature by offering a formally justified, if modest, guarantee alongside consistent empirical support. However, given the limited technical novelty, the sketch-level proof, the narrow empirical scope (single model/configuration, non-adversarial substitution strategy), and the incomplete code release, the paper would benefit from a revision that broadens empirical validation (multiple models, gamma values, and hash windows), tightens the proof, tests adversarially-targeted substitutions, and provides a complete, functioning code release. I recommend major revision before acceptance.