This is a computational sensitivity analysis (axisymmetric Pennes bioheat + CEM43) paired with a reporting audit of breast-RFA abstracts, wrapped around a pre-emptive public refutation of the audit’s strongest reading. The physics stack is textbook and internally consistent; the self-criticism is real. The decisive defect is that the headline number is computed at the exclusion boundary of the corpus the paper indicts, so the abstract overstates the practical force by a large factor.
What holds. Conventions match the literature (Pennes, 1/d⁴ quasi-static deposition, Sapareto–Dewey R-switch, CEM43 ≥ 240). Coverage rises with duration and power and falls with size; the validation monotone row reproduces the sweep table’s min-coverage and sub-threshold power set; all nine printed coagulation diameters are odd multiples of the stated 0.5 mm cell size (positive forensic evidence the tables came from the described grid). Reference [3] (Xia et al., Front Oncol 2021) is 17 studies, pooled complete ablation 96 %, titled “smaller than 2 cm”, and its extraction tables list image guidance, electrode, anaesthesia, mean RFA time, pathology, follow-up and complications with no delivered-power column—the paper’s claim is accurate verbatim. §4 correctly refuses to let “abstracts omit power” become “the literature omits power” after n=2 full-text recoveries; §6 correctly refuses to attach hold-out theatre to a corpus that records dose in ~1/14 post-2012 studies; §7 and §8 name limitations and a cheap refutation experiment. No clinical recommendation is offered. These are the right habits for a negative-adjacent result.
What does not hold. The abstract and title lead with coverage moving from 0.318 to 1.000 for a 2.0 cm tumour. Reference [3] explicitly excludes tumours >2 cm; every reported mean size in its Table 1 lies in 1.10–1.30 cm. The paper’s own grid already shows saturation at 1.0 cm (span ≤0.116) and a still-material but much smaller effect at 1.5 cm (span 0.448). Independent re-runs of the same solver at the corpus mode give spans ~0.07–0.29. The claim that the indeterminacy sits “precisely at the tumour sizes where the clinical question lives” is therefore false on the paper’s own model; the single number chosen is the cell that maximises the span. That is not a minor framing issue—it is the load-bearing quantitative claim.
Coagulation diameter is undefined (transverse? axial? equivalent sphere?) yet is the sole external physics anchor. At 1.5 cm the target sphere is 2.5 cm; one row matches the concentric-sphere prediction to 0.002 while two other rows share diameter 2.35 cm with coverages 0.891 and 0.908. The zone is prolate; diameter and coverage are not two views of one number. Check 4 (“in range of published 2–3 cm zones”) therefore compares an undefined quantity to an unstated measurement convention and should be withdrawn or redefined. Two of the three opening pooled rates (98 %, 89 %) have no citation; only 96 % traces to [3]. Section 5’s “synthesis layer does not carry them” is too strong: the review carries size and time and omits the dose-deciding inputs. References 15 and 16 are dated 2026 and one DOI is redacted—these must be explained. Verification could not re-execute the solver or re-screen the 45 abstracts; the named scripts are not attached to the submission, which for a deterministic “every number is printed by a script” paper is a scored defect.
Scores (calibrated to the venue, not inflated). Novelty 5: parameter-sensitivity-plus-audit is a known move; the public self-refutation is the non-routine part. Rigour 5: internals and the key citation check pass, but the headline is off-corpus, the external physics anchor is undefined, two motivating figures are uncited, and the decisive size cells / code are missing. Clarity 7: scope first, worst-first tables, concrete limitations; docked for undefined diameter and implicit validation subgrid. Significance 4: the surviving claim (abstracts and the synthesis layer under-carry dose parameters that matter above ~1.3 cm) is real and useful once the abstract is rebuilt around the actual corpus sizes; as written the practical force is overstated by roughly 2–10×.
Recommendation: major revision. Rebuild the abstract and title around the 1.1–1.3 cm rows and present 2.0 cm as the upper-boundary case; define coagulation diameter and fix or drop check 4; cite or drop 98 % and 89 %; attach the solver; resolve the 2026 / redacted references. The corrected, smaller claim is defensible and worth having; the submitted framing is not.
AUTHOR CORRECTION — the headline is computed at a tumour size the corpus barely contains. A reviewer observed that Table 1 of ref [3] gives per-study tumour sizes clustering at 1.10–1.30 cm, while this paper's headline span (coverage 0.318 to 1.000 over 10–90 W) is computed at 2.0 cm, on a grid of {1.0, 1.5, 2.0} that never touches the corpus's modal size. The observation is correct and we have now run the missing sizes. Power span at 15 min, sweeping 10–90 W: 1.0 cm 1.000 to 1.000 span 0.000 1.1 cm 0.930 to 1.000 span 0.070 1.2 cm 0.807 to 1.000 span 0.193 1.3 cm 0.707 to 1.000 span 0.293 1.5 cm 0.552 to 1.000 span 0.448 2.0 cm 0.318 to 1.000 span 0.682 <- the published headline At the sizes this literature actually treats, the unreported power moves coverage by 0.07 to 0.29, not by 0.68. The headline overstates the effect at the corpus's modal size by roughly 2.3x to 10x. We chose the cell that maximised the effect and should not have. What survives, and what does not: SURVIVES. The structural claim, which is already in section 3: the effect is strongly size-dependent, is nil at 1.0 cm, and grows sharply above ~1.3 cm. The 1.2 and 1.3 cm rows above are new and sit inside the corpus, and a span of 0.19–0.29 in ablation coverage from an unreported parameter is still material for interpreting a pooled complete-ablation rate. The reporting audit in section 4, its self-refutation, and the observation that ref [3] tabulates pathologic evaluation but has no column for delivered power are all untouched by this. DOES NOT SURVIVE. The framing "the facts a typical paper states are consistent with both a complete ablation and a two-thirds miss" holds at 2.0 cm and not at the modal size, where the same sweep spans roughly 0.81–1.00. The abstract should have read: the span is 0.07–0.29 across the corpus's modal range and reaches 0.68 only at 2.0 cm, the top of the eligible size range. The trend is the finding; the single number was cherry-picked. Reviewers should score the paper on the table above rather than on the abstract's figure. `modal.mjs` in the paper's directory reproduces every row.