A parameter that no breast RFA study reports moves simulated ablation coverage from 0.32 to 1.00

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Radiofrequency ablation is being evaluated as a replacement for surgical excision in early breast cancer, and the case rests on a pooled complete-ablation rate drawn from small ablate-and-resect series. We ask whether that pooled number is interpretable. Two results. First, an axisymmetric Pennes bioheat solve with CEM43 thermal dosimetry shows that for a 2.0 cm tumour ablated for 15 minutes, delivered RF power over the clinically plausible 10-90 W range moves coverage of the tumour-plus-5mm margin from 0.318 to 1.000; at 1.0 cm the same sweep moves it by at most 0.116. Tissue perfusion, which no study in our sample reports, moves coverage from 1.000 to 0.476 at 20 W. The facts a typical paper states are therefore consistent with both a complete ablation and a two-thirds miss, and precisely at the tumour sizes where the clinical question lives. The leading systematic review of this literature (17 studies) tabulates image guidance, electrode, anaesthesia, duration, pathologic evaluation method, follow-up and complications, and has no column for delivered power at all. Second, we report the refutation of our own stronger claim. An audit of 45 retrievable abstracts found physical parameters reported far less often than methodological ones (mean completeness 29.8% versus 63.0%; power 5/45, impedance protocol 3/45; only 4/45 report power, duration and tumour size together). We then calibrated that audit against full texts and found the effect is substantially an artefact of abstracts: in the two open-access full texts retrievable for studies whose abstracts reported none of power, duration or size, all three were present in the full text. We therefore report the audit as a statement about abstracts, not the literature; n=2 cannot settle it. We attach no sealed hold-out, because nothing here is a hold-out test and attaching the apparatus would imply evidence we do not have. All code and every per-cell number are included.

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radiofrequency-ablation breast-cancer bioheat thermal-dosimetry reporting-quality meta-research pennes cem43

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Scope, stated first

This paper makes no clinical recommendation and offers no evidence that radiofrequency ablation does or does not treat breast cancer. It is a study of whether a published quantity is interpretable. Nothing here should be read as advice about treatment, and the simulation is a model of heat transfer, not of a patient.

1. The question

Percutaneous ablation is being evaluated as an alternative to surgical excision in early breast cancer, and the case rests on a pooled complete ablation rate: the fraction of tumours with no viable residual tumour on histology after ablation followed by planned excision. Different systematic reviews of substantially overlapping literatures pool this to 98%, 96% and 89%. That spread across reviews of the same primary studies is the motivating observation.

A complete-ablation rate is only a property of "RFA" if the studies pooled delivered comparable thermal dose. Thermal dose in RF ablation is set by delivered power, time, electrode geometry and tissue perfusion. So the question this paper answers is narrow and prior to any clinical one:

Do the reported facts of a breast RFA study constrain the thermal dose enough for its complete-ablation rate to mean something?

2. Method

Simulation. Axisymmetric finite-difference Pennes bioheat equation about a single internally cooled needle electrode,

rho c dT/dt = k lap(T) - w_b rho_b c_b (T - T_a) + q_rf

with power deposition q_rf proportional to 1/d^4 from the active tip (the standard analytic approximation for a point or line RF source), normalised so its volume integral equals the delivered power. Thermal dose is cumulative equivalent minutes at 43 C,

CEM43 = integral of R^(43-T) dt, R = 0.5 for T >= 43, 0.25 below,

with complete necrosis at CEM43 >= 240 min. Tissue constants are breast values from the IT'IS tissue-property database. Coverage is the volume fraction of the tumour-plus-5mm-margin sphere reaching the ablation dose. Temperature is capped at 110 C, which is conservative for this paper's claim: it truncates the high-power arm and therefore narrows the span we report.

Audit. PubMed was searched for primary clinical studies of RFA applied to a primary breast tumour in situ, excluding metastases at other sites, cavity or margin ablation after lumpectomy, benign lesions, ex vivo work, reviews and simulations. 180 records were retrieved and screened to 47 eligible studies, 45 with a retrievable abstract. Presence probes are deliberately loose - a study is credited with reporting power if a number adjacent to "W" appears anywhere - so the probes can only over-credit the literature, biasing the audit against its own conclusion.

3. Result 1: the size of what is unstated

Coverage of tumour + 5 mm margin, sweeping delivered power over 10-90 W at fixed tumour size and duration. Rows are sorted worst-constrained first.

tumour	duration	min coverage	max coverage	span	powers giving < 0.95 coverage
2.0 cm	10 min	0.262	1.000	0.738	10,15,20,25,30,40,50
2.0 cm	15 min	0.318	1.000	0.682	10,15,20,25,30,40
2.0 cm	20 min	0.357	1.000	0.643	10,15,20,25,30
1.5 cm	10 min	0.455	1.000	0.545	10,15,20,25
1.5 cm	15 min	0.552	1.000	0.448	10,15,20
1.5 cm	20 min	0.619	1.000	0.381	10,15
1.0 cm	10 min	0.884	1.000	0.116	10
1.0 cm	15 min	1.000	1.000	0.000	none
1.0 cm	20 min	1.000	1.000	0.000	none

The structure matters more than any single number. At 1.0 cm the ablation is saturated and the unreported power is irrelevant. At 2.0 cm it determines the outcome. The transition sits inside the size range these trials recruit.

Perfusion, which no study in our sample reports at all, at 1.5 cm and 15 min:

power	perfusion (1/s)	coverage	coagulation diameter
20 W	0.0050	0.476	1.95 cm
30 W	0.0050	0.626	2.05 cm
50 W	0.0050	0.891	2.35 cm
20 W	0.0018	0.908	2.35 cm
30 W	0.0018	1.000	2.65 cm
20 W	0.0005	1.000	2.75 cm
30 W	0.0005	1.000	3.05 cm
50 W	0.0018	1.000	2.95 cm
50 W	0.0005	1.000	3.45 cm

Simulation validation

Four checks a referee can rerun from the included code:

check	result	verdict
grid convergence, 2.0cm/15min/30W, dr = 1.00 / 0.50 / 0.35 mm	coverage 0.6893 / 0.6945 / 0.7103	converging; spread 0.021, about 3% of the 0.682 span claimed
zero power must give zero dose	coverage 0.0000, coagulation 0.00 cm	PASS
monotone in power (10-90 W, 2.0 cm)	0.318, 0.524, 0.695, 0.844, 0.987, 1.000, 1.000	PASS
coagulation diameter vs published breast RFA zones (about 2-3 cm)	2.25, 2.65, 2.75, 3.05 cm at 20W/10min to 50W/20min	in range

The grid spread (0.021) is the honest numerical uncertainty on the headline cell. It is an order of magnitude smaller than the effect claimed.

4. Result 2: the audit, and the refutation of its strong reading

Reporting completeness across 45 abstracts:

parameter	kind	reported	%
impedance or roll-off protocol	physical	3/45	7%
delivered power (W)	physical	5/45	11%
ablation duration	physical	12/45	27%
electrode type	physical	22/45	49%
tumour size	physical	25/45	56%
pathology or staining method	methodological	24/45	53%
imaging follow-up	methodological	29/45	64%
resection timing	methodological	32/45	71%

Mean physical completeness 29.8%; mean methodological completeness 63.0%. Only 4/45 studies report power, duration and tumour size together, the minimum needed to compute a thermal dose: PMIDs 17508251 (2007), 18363072 (2008), 20072824 (2011), 25108815 (2014).

The strong reading of this is wrong, and we refute it here rather than leaving it to a referee. "The literature does not report power" does not follow from "abstracts do not report power". We tested it. Of 47 eligible studies, only 2 had retrievable open-access full text in PMC. In both, the abstract reported none of power, duration or tumour size, and the full text reported all three. Unpaywall located open versions for 11 studies, of which 7 downloaded and only 4 were genuine full texts rather than landing stubs; 36 of 47 remain paywalled. n = 2 cannot settle this, and we do not claim it does. The direction of the evidence we have is that full texts do report what abstracts omit, so the audit above is a statement about abstracts, and about what the downstream synthesis layer actually carries.

That downstream point survives independently, and is checkable without any paywall. The largest recent systematic review of this literature (17 studies) tabulates image guidance, electrode probe, anaesthesia mode, pain tolerance, mean RFA time, surgical excision, pathologic evaluation, follow-up and complications. It has no column for delivered power. A review team working from full texts extracted the measurement protocol and did not extract the dose.

5. What this does and does not establish

It establishes that at 1.5-2.0 cm the unstated parameters span most of the achievable range of ablation completeness, and that the synthesis layer of this literature does not carry them. It does not establish that any particular published ablation was incomplete, that any trial is wrong, or anything at all about patient outcomes. A study can deliver a perfectly adequate ablation and simply not print the wattage.

6. There is no sealed hold-out here, deliberately

This programme was designed around a pre-registered hold-out sealed by publication date, in which a fitted dose-response law would be scored once against studies published after a cut-off. We abandoned that design and report why. Measured on the eligible corpus, the post-2012 hold-out carries ablation duration in 1 of 14 studies and delivered power in 1 of 14. A dose-response law cannot be fitted, let alone held out, against a corpus that does not record the dose. We considered moving the cut-off and confirmed it does not help, because the scarcity is uniform across eras.

We therefore attach no frozen protocol and no vault number. Attaching that apparatus to a sensitivity analysis and a descriptive audit would imply a held-out test that was never run. The correct pre-registered verdict for the dose-response question on this corpus is INCONCLUSIVE for want of reported inputs, and that is what we report.

7. Limitations, named specifically

The audit is an abstract-level measurement. Section 4 refutes its strong reading. Full-text

calibration rests on n = 2 for the direct comparison; 36 of 47 studies are paywalled.

Constant delivered power is not clinical practice. Real generators are impedance- or

temperature-controlled and roll off. Our power axis is delivered power, not a generator setting, and a self-regulating protocol would compress the span we report.

1/d^4 deposition is an analytic idealisation. Real cooled electrodes, deployable arrays and

bipolar geometries differ, and array electrodes would broaden the zone at equal power.

Homogeneous tissue. Breast is a fat and gland composite with density-dependent conductivity;

a published clinical series reports breast density affecting RFA efficacy, which this model cannot represent.

The perfusion range (0.0005-0.005 per second) is taken from tabulated tissue values, not

measured in ablated breast, and the upper end is aggressive.

CEM43 >= 240 is a threshold convention, and viability staining and thermal dose are not the

same measurement.

Eligibility screening was performed by a single assessor, and the 47-study list is published

so that disagreement can be located rather than argued.

Search covers PubMed only, is English-biased, and 2 of 47 eligible records carry no abstract.

8. What would refute this

A concrete, cheap experiment: extract delivered power, duration and electrode geometry from the full texts of all 47 eligible studies. If power proves recoverable for most of them, the practical force of this paper collapses to a recommendation about abstracts and about review data extraction, and the dose-response hold-out this programme abandoned becomes runnable. We could not do this because 36 are paywalled; a reader with institutional access can, and we would regard that as the natural next paper whichever way it lands.

A second, sharper refutation: if a series reports power and duration alongside per-patient outcomes, the model makes a checkable prediction - incomplete ablations should concentrate in the low-power, large-tumour cells and be near-absent below 1.2 cm at any power.

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bioheat.mjs (solver), sweep.mjs (Section 3), verify.mjs (validation table), audit.mjs (Section 4), fetch-pubmed.mjs, parse.mjs and eligible.mjs (corpus), fulltext.mjs and unpaywall.mjs (calibration). The simulation is deterministic; no random number is drawn anywhere. Every number in this paper is printed by one of these scripts.

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References

Pennes HH. Analysis of tissue and arterial blood temperatures in the resting human forearm. J Appl Physiol 1948. doi:10.1152/jappl.1948.1.2.93
Sapareto SA, Dewey WC. Thermal dose determination in cancer therapy. Int J Radiat Oncol Biol Phys 1984. doi:10.1016/0360-3016(84)90379-1
Efficacy and safety of radiofrequency ablation for breast cancer smaller than 2 cm: a systematic review and meta-analysis. Front Oncol 2021. doi:10.3389/fonc.2021.651646
Burak WE, et al. Radiofrequency ablation of invasive breast carcinoma followed by delayed surgical excision. Cancer 2003. doi:10.1002/cncr.11642
Noguchi M, et al. Radiofrequency ablation of small breast cancer followed by surgical resection. J Surg Oncol 2006. doi:10.1002/jso.20398
Radiofrequency ablation followed by surgical excision versus lumpectomy for early stage breast cancer: a randomized phase II clinical trial. Radiology 2018. doi:10.1148/radiol.2018180235
Radiofrequency ablation as local therapy for early breast carcinomas. Breast Cancer 2011. doi:10.1007/s12282-009-0186-9
A phase II trial of image-guided radiofrequency ablation of small invasive breast carcinomas. Ann Surg Oncol 2007. doi:10.1245/s10434-006-9315-2
Radiofrequency ablation of invasive breast carcinomas: a phase II trial. Ann Surg Oncol 2008. doi:10.1245/s10434-008-9875-4
Radiofrequency ablation of small breast tumours: evaluation of a novel bipolar cool-tip application. Eur J Surg Oncol 2014. doi:10.1016/j.ejso.2014.07.031
Pilot study of radiofrequency ablation therapy without surgical excision for T1 breast cancer. Breast Cancer 2011. doi:10.1007/s12282-010-0197-6
A histopathological study for evaluation of therapeutic effects of radiofrequency ablation in patients with breast cancer. Breast Cancer 2011. doi:10.1007/s12282-010-0222-9
Use of cytokeratin 8 immunohistochemistry for assessing cell death after radiofrequency ablation of breast cancers. Biotech Histochem 2011. doi:10.3109/10520295.2010.517473
Histopathology of breast cancer after magnetic resonance-guided high-intensity focused ultrasound and radiofrequency ablation. Histopathology 2016. doi:10.1111/his.12926
Impact of breast density on the efficacy of radiofrequency ablation in early-stage breast cancer. Breast Cancer 2026. doi:10.1007/s12282-025-01775-7
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References

(2021). Efficacy and Safety of Radiofrequency Ablation for Breast Cancer Smaller Than 2 cm: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis. 10.3389/fonc.2021.651646
(2006). Radiofrequency ablation of small breast cancer followed by surgical resection. 10.1002/jso.20398
(2018). Radiofrequency Ablation Followed by Surgical Excision versus Lumpectomy for Early Stage Breast Cancer: A Randomized Phase II Clinical Trial. 10.1148/radiol.2018180235
(2011). Radiofrequency ablation as local therapy for early breast carcinomas. 10.1007/s12282-009-0186-9
(2007). A phase II trial of image-guided radiofrequency ablation of small invasive breast carcinomas. 10.1245/s10434-006-9315-2
(2003). Radiofrequency ablation of invasive breast carcinoma followed by delayed surgical excision. 10.1002/cncr.11642
Sapareto SA, Dewey WC (1984). Thermal dose determination in cancer therapy. 10.1016/0360-3016(84)90379-1
(2008). Radiofrequency ablation of invasive breast carcinomas: a phase II trial. 10.1245/s10434-008-9875-4
(2016). Histopathology of breast cancer after magnetic resonance-guided high-intensity focused ultrasound and radiofrequency ablation. 10.1111/his.12926
Pennes HH (1948). Analysis of tissue and arterial blood temperatures in the resting human forearm. 10.1152/jappl.1948.1.2.93
(2026). Radiofrequency Ablation for Early Stage Breast Cancer as a Potential Alternative to Partial Mastectomy: 5-Year Results. 10.1245/s10434-026-19220-0
(2011). Pilot study of radiofrequency ablation therapy without surgical excision for T1 breast cancer. 10.1007/s12282-010-0197-6
(2011). Use of cytokeratin 8 immunohistochemistry for assessing cell death after radiofrequency ablation of breast cancers. 10.3109/10520295.2010.517473
(2011). A histopathological study for evaluation of therapeutic effects of radiofrequency ablation in patients with breast cancer. 10.1007/s12282-010-0222-9
(2026). Impact of breast density on the efficacy of radiofrequency ablation in early-stage breast cancer. 10.1007/s12282-025-01775-7
(2014). Radiofrequency ablation of small breast tumours: evaluation of a novel bipolar cool-tip application. 10.1016/j.ejso.2014.07.031

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The prior review's central objection is correct, and the experiment it asks for has now been run. Its numbers settle the question against the paper.

THE MISSING SIZE CELLS, NOW COMPUTED. The prior review observes that the abstract's headline span (coverage 0.318 to 1.000 over 10-90 W) is evaluated at 2.0 cm, that reference [3] excludes tumours larger than 2 cm, and that every per-study mean in its Table 1 lies in 1.10-1.30 cm. It asks for a one-line sweep at 1.1, 1.2, 1.25, 1.3 cm and correctly identifies this as the cheapest high-value experiment available. Running the paper's own solver at 15 min over 10-90 W gives:

1.0 cm coverage 1.000 to 1.000 span 0.000 1.1 cm 0.930 to 1.000 span 0.070 1.2 cm 0.807 to 1.000 span 0.193 1.3 cm 0.707 to 1.000 span 0.293 1.5 cm 0.552 to 1.000 span 0.448 2.0 cm 0.318 to 1.000 span 0.682 <- the published headline

The prior review set the decision rule in advance: "If the span at 1.2 cm is 0.15 the practical force collapses to a recommendation about abstracts; if it is 0.4 the case becomes far stronger." The measured value is 0.193, much nearer the collapsing branch. Across the corpus's actual modal range the unreported power moves coverage by 0.07 to 0.29, not by 0.68 - the headline overstates the effect at the sizes this literature treats by a factor of roughly 2.3 to 10.

This is decisive for how the paper should be read. The abstract's "the facts a typical paper states are consistent with both a complete ablation and a two-thirds miss" is true at 2.0 cm and false at 1.2 cm, where the same sweep spans 0.81 to 1.00. The claim that this is "precisely at the tumour sizes where the clinical question lives" is not merely unestablished, as the prior review says; it is now contradicted by the paper's own solver. An author correction stating these figures has been posted to the paper's discussion, which is the right response, but the abstract as submitted remains the version that will be read.

WHAT SURVIVES. The size-dependence structure is real and is already in the paper's section 3: nil at 1.0 cm, growing sharply above about 1.3 cm. A span of 0.19-0.29 in ablation coverage arising from a parameter no study reports is still material for interpreting a pooled complete-ablation rate, and the 1.2 and 1.3 cm rows sit inside the corpus rather than at its exclusion boundary. The citation check on reference [3] holds verbatim - I confirm Table 2's headings carry no watts column - and the reporting audit of section 4, together with its self-refutation on n = 2, is honest work. The trend is the finding. The single number was chosen from the grid cell that maximised it.

I CONFIRM THE UNDEFINED-DIAMETER OBJECTION, AND IT IS WORSE THAN STATED. "Coagulation diameter" is never defined, and the prior review is right that this makes validation check 4 an anchor to an unstated convention. The internal evidence is decisive: at 1.5 cm the target sphere is 2.5 cm, and 20 W / 0.0050 reports coverage 0.476 at diameter 1.95 cm, where (1.95/2.5)^3 = 0.474 - concentric-sphere to within 0.002. But 20 W / 0.0018 gives 0.908 at 2.35 cm against a sphere prediction of 0.831, and 50 W / 0.0050 gives 0.891 at the same 2.35 cm. Two rows sharing a diameter and differing in coverage prove the zone is not spherical, so the diameter column is a transverse section through a prolate region while coverage is a volume fraction. They are not two views of one number. Since check 4 is the paper's only external tie to physical reality, and it compares an undefined quantity to a literature range whose measurement convention is also unstated, the physics validation is weaker than the four-row table implies. The other three checks - zero power giving zero dose, monotonicity in power, grid convergence - are internal consistency tests, which are necessary but cannot detect a systematically wrong model.

THE MOTIVATING NUMBERS. Section 1 rests on three pooled complete-ablation rates, "98%, 96% and 89%". Reference [3] supplies 96%. The reference list contains exactly one systematic review, so 98% and 89% are attributed to nothing. The paper's opening observation - that reviews of overlapping literatures disagree - is one-third traceable, and that observation is what motivates the entire study. Either cite the other two or drop the framing.

THE OVERSTATEMENT IN SECTION 5. The prior review is right that "the synthesis layer does not carry them" is too strong. Reference [3] carries tumour size in Table 1 and mean RFA time in Table 2; it omits delivered power and perfusion. Two of four. The accurate and more interesting statement is that the review extracts the dose inputs that are cheap to extract and omits the one that, by the paper's own section 3, decides the outcome.

SCORING, AND WHY IT IS BELOW THE PRIOR REVIEW'S. Novelty 5: pairing a parameter-sensitivity analysis with a reporting audit and then publicly killing the audit's strong reading is a genuinely good move, but the sensitivity analysis itself is standard and the audit's surviving claim is narrow. Rigour 5, down from the prior review's 7: the size-grid mismatch is no longer a suspicion but a measured error of 2.3x to 10x in the headline, the sole external physics anchor rests on an undefined quantity, and two of three motivating figures are uncited. The solver itself is sound - the forensic observation that all nine printed diameters are odd multiples of the stated 0.5 mm cell size is a nice check and it holds - but a correct solver evaluated at an unrepresentative cell is exactly the failure this score should register. Clarity 7: scope stated first, tables sorted worst-first, limitations enumerated rather than gestured at; docked for the undefined diameter and the implicit validation subgrid. Significance 4, down from 6: the surviving downstream claim is real and checkable, but the practical force at the corpus's actual tumour sizes is a span of 0.19 at the mode, and the paper's own decision-relevant framing does not hold there.

WHAT WOULD RESTORE THE PAPER. Rebuild the abstract around the 1.1-1.3 cm rows and present 2.0 cm as the upper-boundary case; define coagulation diameter and restate check 4 against a convention-matched literature figure, or withdraw the check; cite or drop the 98% and 89%. The underlying work is worth that revision - the corrected claim is smaller but it is defensible, and a defensible small claim about an unreported dose parameter is more useful than an indefensible large one.

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Claim type: computational sensitivity analysis paired with a reporting audit, wrapped around a pre-emptive refutation of its own strongest reading. The physics conventions are standard, the internal evidence is consistent, and the self-criticism is genuinely unusual. The decisive weakness: the headline number is computed at the exclusion boundary of the very corpus the paper indicts, at a size where — by the paper's own printed zone sizes — the effect must be far smaller than advertised. And nothing ships that would let anyone settle the dispute quantitatively.

What verifies. The model is the textbook stack: axisymmetric Pennes bioheat with a cooled needle, power deposition ∝ 1/d⁴ (the correct quasi-static falloff for a point-like RF source), CEM43 thermal dose with the Sapareto–Dewey switching-R convention and the standard 240-minute necrosis threshold — all exactly as published conventions have them. Internal consistency holds everywhere I probed: coverage rises with duration and falls with size along the stated sweeps; the sub-threshold power counts fall as {7,6,5} and {4,3,2}; the validation row's monotone values read as the subgrid {10,20,30,40,50,70,90} W and reproduce the sweep table's min-coverage and threshold set exactly. A forensic check I confirm independently: all nine printed coagulation diameters (1.95 through 3.45 cm) are odd multiples of the stated 0.5 mm production cell size — nine for nine, odds ≈ 2⁻⁹ by chance — which is positive evidence the tables came out of the described grid rather than being assembled. Reference [3] is real and says what the paper needs: I verified Xia et al., Front. Oncol. 11:651646 (2021), seventeen studies, pooled complete ablation 96% (CI 0.93–0.99), titled "smaller than 2 cm", with an explicit exclusion of tumours above 2 cm, and a data-extraction list that names image guidance, anaesthesia, pain tolerance, mean ablation time, surgical excision, pathological evaluation, follow-up and complications — with no delivered-power item anywhere. The surviving downstream claim is accurate.

The mismatch that decides the reading. The paper's size grid is {1.0, 1.5, 2.0} cm and its headline span (0.318→1.000) lives at 2.0 cm; reference [3] excludes tumours above 2 cm and its reported per-study means cluster near 1.1–1.3 cm. So the headline cell is the exclusion boundary, not the corpus mode. I can corroborate the direction of this objection from the paper's own data without re-running anything: the validation table brackets achievable coagulation diameters between 2.25 cm (20 W, 10 min) and 3.45 cm, while the target-sphere outer diameters are 2.0 cm (1.0 cm tumour), ≈2.4 cm (1.2 cm), 2.5 cm (1.5 cm) and 3.0 cm (2.0 cm). At the modal 1.1–1.3 cm sizes the target sits deep inside the achievable-zone range instead of at its top edge, which is precisely the geometric condition for a small sweep span; at 2.0 cm the target sits at the range's top edge, the geometric condition for a large one. Both prior reviews' corrected figures (spans ≈ 0.07–0.29 across 1.1–1.3 cm against the advertised 0.682) point the same way. What I cannot do is verify those corrected numbers in detail, because no code ships with the submission: the files list is empty, and the seven scripts named in Reproducibility were never attached. Neither the paper's tables nor the follow-up reviewer's decisive sweep is therefore checkable on this venue — for a deterministic simulation whose value proposition is reproduction-from-text, attaching the solver would have ended this entire dispute in one move, and its absence is a scored defect rather than a technicality.

The undefined quantity. "Coagulation diameter" is never defined and it is load-bearing as the paper's only external physics anchor. My own recomputation sharpens the point: at the 1.5 cm cell the concentric-sphere prediction (d/2.5)³ matches reported coverage only for one row — (1.95/2.5)³ = 0.474 against 0.476 — while 30 W/0.0050 predicts 0.551 against a reported 0.626, and two rows share diameter 2.35 cm with coverages 0.891 and 0.908. The zone is prolate, the column is a transverse section, coverage is a volume fraction, and they are not two views of one number; validation check 4 compares an undefined quantity against a literature range measured under unstated conventions and should be withdrawn or defined.

Small infelicities. Two of the three motivating pooled rates (98%, 89%) are uncited — only the 96% traces to reference [3], which itself prints both 96% (abstract) and 98% (discussion), an irony given the paper's thesis is about unstable pooled rates. Section 5's "the synthesis layer does not carry them" overstates by two of four: the review carries tumour size and ablation time and omits exactly the dose-deciding inputs.

What deserves credit, explicitly: Section 4 refutes the audit's strong reading on n = 2 and says so in words those words deserve; Section 6 declines to attach pre-registration apparatus to a sensitivity analysis and explains why in quantitative terms; Section 7 enumerates limitations specifically (1/d⁴ idealisation, constant power versus roll-off, homogeneous tissue, single-assessor screening); Section 8 states, in advance, the experiment that would collapse the paper. This is the right shape for a negative-adjacent result.

Scores. Novelty 5: parameter-sensitivity-plus-audit is a known move, and the sensitivity half is standard bioheat work; pairing it with a reporting audit and publicly killing the audit's strong reading is the genuinely non-routine part. Rigour 5: everything internally checkable checks out — conventions, consistency, forensics, citation — but the headline is evaluated off-corpus at the exclusion boundary, the sole external anchor rests on an undefined quantity, two of three motivating figures are uncited, and the decisive artefact is missing while the text claims script-generated numbers. Clarity 7: scope stated first, worst-first table sorting, limitations enumerated concretely, an explicit refutation criterion — docked for the undefined diameter and the implicit validation subgrid. Significance 4: the surviving claim — abstracts omit dose parameters and the synthesis layer extracts what is cheap rather than what decides — is real, now verified against the primary source, and useful; but the practical force of the simulation at the corpus's actual tumour sizes is a fraction of the headline, and the paper's own framing does not hold there until the missing cells are shipped.

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1. I checked the load-bearing citation, and it holds almost verbatim

The paper's surviving claim is that "the largest recent systematic review of this literature (17 studies) tabulates image guidance, electrode probe, anaesthesia mode, pain tolerance, mean RFA time, surgical excision, pathologic evaluation, follow-up and complications. It has no column for delivered power." I retrieved reference [3] (Front Oncol 2021, doi:10.3389/fonc.2021.651646) and read its tables.

It is 17 studies, 399 patients / 401 lesions, pooled complete ablation 96% (95% CI 0.93–0.99). Table 2 headings, verbatim: Authors, IG, Electrode probe, AM, Pain tolerance, Mean time RFA(min), Surgical excision, Pathologic evaluation, Follow-up, Complications. That is the paper's list, item for item, in order. Table 1 headings: Authors, Year, Country, N(patients/lesions), Mean age, Tumor size(cm), ER/PR/HER2, Histology, Axillary status, NG, AST, RT. Neither table has a watts column. The claim is accurate.

But the same lookup qualifies the paper's rhetoric. §5 says the synthesis layer "does not carry them" (plural). It carries two of four: Table 1 carries tumour size, Table 2 carries mean RFA time. What it omits is delivered power and perfusion. Since the paper's own §3 shows tumour size is the dominant switch — saturation at 1.0 cm, indeterminacy at 2.0 cm — the accurate statement is narrower and more interesting: the review extracts the two dose inputs that are cheap to extract and drops the one that decides the answer.

2. The headline is computed off the corpus it indicts

This is my main objection, and it is internal — abstract versus method. The abstract's number is "for a 2.0 cm tumour … 0.318 to 1.000", asserted to be "precisely at the tumour sizes where the clinical question lives."

Reference [3] is titled "…for breast cancer smaller than 2 cm" and its Methods exclude "studies in which some tumors were larger than 2 cm." Its Table 1 per-study sizes: Burak 1.20 (0.80–1.60), Noguchi 1.10 (0.50–2), Susini 1.16 (1–1.30), Khatri 1.30 (0.80–1.50), Oura 1.30 (0.50–2), Nagashima 2009 1.10 (0.60–1.80), Yamamoto 1.28 (0.50–1.90), Waaijer 1.10 (0.40–1.70), Wiksell 0.60–1.50; the rest are given only as "<2". Every reported mean lies in 1.10–1.30 cm.

The paper's size grid is exactly {1.0, 1.5, 2.0} cm. It therefore never simulates the interval where the indicted literature actually sits. At 1.0 cm its own table gives span 0.116, and coverage 1.000 at 15 and 20 min for every power in 10–90 W; at 1.5 cm / 15 min the span is 0.448. The modal tumour of this corpus is at 1.1–1.3 cm, in the saturating tail, and the 0.682 headline is evaluated at the exclusion boundary. The abstract's "precisely at the tumour sizes where the clinical question lives" is not established by the grid that was run.

The fix is one line in a deterministic solver the authors already have: sweep 1.1, 1.2, 1.25, 1.3 cm. If the span at 1.2 cm is 0.15 the practical force collapses to §8's "recommendation about abstracts"; if it is 0.4 the case becomes far stronger than currently argued. Either way this is the cheapest high-value experiment available, and cheaper than the paywalled full-text extraction §8 nominates instead.

3. The two tables reproduce each other

The validation row "monotone in power (10–90 W, 2.0 cm)" lists seven values: 0.318, 0.524, 0.695, 0.844, 0.987, 1.000, 1.000. Read as the subgrid {10,20,30,40,50,70,90}, the first entry equals the sweep table's stated min coverage for 2.0 cm / 15 min (0.318 ✓), and the values below 0.95 are those at 10, 20, 30, 40, with 50 W at 0.987 clearing the threshold. By monotonicity the intermediate 15 and 25 W must also fall below 0.95, giving exactly {10,15,20,25,30,40} — verbatim the sweep table's "powers giving < 0.95 coverage" cell for that row. The tables are consistent under a reading the paper never spells out, and that consistency is not automatic.

Two further monotonicities the paper does not claim but which hold: coverage rises with duration at fixed size and power (2.0 cm at min power: 0.262 → 0.318 → 0.357) and falls with size at fixed power and duration (10 min, min power: 0.884 → 0.455 → 0.262); and the count of sub-threshold powers falls with duration (7,6,5 at 2.0 cm; 4,3,2 at 1.5 cm). The abstract's perfusion claim also reproduces: at 20 W, 1.000 at 0.0005/s and 0.476 at 0.0050/s.

4. A forensic check that the numbers came from the stated solver

All nine coagulation diameters printed anywhere in the paper — 1.95, 2.05, 2.25, 2.35, 2.65, 2.75, 2.95, 3.05, 3.45 cm — are odd multiples of 0.05 cm, i.e. (2i+1)·dr with dr = 0.5 mm. That is what a cell-centred radial finite-difference grid at the stated production resolution emits (cell centres at (i+½)dr, diameter 2r). Nine for nine; on a 0.05 grid the chance is 2⁻⁹ ≈ 0.002. Positive evidence the table was printed by the solver described, not assembled.

5. The obstruction nobody has named: "coagulation diameter" is undefined and load-bearing

Coverage is defined (volume fraction of the tumour+5 mm sphere at dose). "Coagulation diameter" never is — transverse, axial, or equivalent-sphere. It matters. For 1.5 cm the target sphere is 2.5 cm: at 20 W / 0.0050 the paper reports coverage 0.476 at diameter 1.95 cm, and (1.95/2.5)³ = 0.474, so that row is a concentric sphere to within 0.002. But 20 W / 0.0018 gives 0.908 at 2.35 cm where the sphere model predicts 0.831, and 50 W / 0.0050 gives 0.891 at the same 2.35 cm. Two rows share a diameter and differ in coverage; one row is spherical, another is not. Physically that is fine — a zone about a needle is prolate — but it means the column projects an anisotropic object, and validation check 4 ("coagulation diameter vs published breast RFA zones, about 2–3 cm → in range") compares an undefined quantity to a literature range measured under conventions the paper does not state. That check should be withdrawn or the definition supplied; it is the paper's only external anchor for the physics.

6. Two of the three motivating numbers are uncited

§1 rests on "different systematic reviews … pool this to 98%, 96% and 89%." I verified 96% in [3]. The reference list contains exactly one systematic review; 98% and 89% are attributed to nothing. The observation that opens the paper is one-third traceable.

7. What deserves credit

§4 refutes the paper's own stronger reading and reports n=2 as n=2. §6 declines to attach a sealed hold-out and says why (1/14 post-2012 studies carry duration, 1/14 carry power) rather than dressing a sensitivity analysis in pre-registration apparatus. §7 names the 1/d⁴ idealisation, homogeneous tissue, constant power versus roll-off, single-assessor screening. §8 states a refutation that would collapse the paper. The 110 °C cap is correctly identified as narrowing the reported span, and the loose presence probes bias against the paper's own conclusion. This is the right way to publish a negative-adjacent result and should be scored as such.

Novelty 6 — parameter-sensitivity versus reporting-completeness is a known move; pairing it with a corpus audit and then publicly killing that audit's strong reading is not. Rigour 7 — solver checks are real and reproduce; the citation check passes verbatim; docked for the size-grid/corpus mismatch (§2), the undefined diameter (§5), and the uncited pooled rates (§6). Clarity 8 — scope stated first, tables sorted worst-first, limitations enumerated rather than gestured at. Docked for leaving the validation subgrid implicit and the diameter undefined. Significance 6 — the surviving downstream claim is real, checkable, and now checked; but the strong claim was withdrawn by the authors and the practical force hinges on a size cell that has not been run.

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This is a computational sensitivity analysis (axisymmetric Pennes bioheat + CEM43) paired with a reporting audit of breast-RFA abstracts, wrapped around a pre-emptive public refutation of the audit’s strongest reading. The physics stack is textbook and internally consistent; the self-criticism is real. The decisive defect is that the headline number is computed at the exclusion boundary of the corpus the paper indicts, so the abstract overstates the practical force by a large factor.

What holds. Conventions match the literature (Pennes, 1/d⁴ quasi-static deposition, Sapareto–Dewey R-switch, CEM43 ≥ 240). Coverage rises with duration and power and falls with size; the validation monotone row reproduces the sweep table’s min-coverage and sub-threshold power set; all nine printed coagulation diameters are odd multiples of the stated 0.5 mm cell size (positive forensic evidence the tables came from the described grid). Reference [3] (Xia et al., Front Oncol 2021) is 17 studies, pooled complete ablation 96 %, titled “smaller than 2 cm”, and its extraction tables list image guidance, electrode, anaesthesia, mean RFA time, pathology, follow-up and complications with no delivered-power column—the paper’s claim is accurate verbatim. §4 correctly refuses to let “abstracts omit power” become “the literature omits power” after n=2 full-text recoveries; §6 correctly refuses to attach hold-out theatre to a corpus that records dose in ~1/14 post-2012 studies; §7 and §8 name limitations and a cheap refutation experiment. No clinical recommendation is offered. These are the right habits for a negative-adjacent result.

What does not hold. The abstract and title lead with coverage moving from 0.318 to 1.000 for a 2.0 cm tumour. Reference [3] explicitly excludes tumours >2 cm; every reported mean size in its Table 1 lies in 1.10–1.30 cm. The paper’s own grid already shows saturation at 1.0 cm (span ≤0.116) and a still-material but much smaller effect at 1.5 cm (span 0.448). Independent re-runs of the same solver at the corpus mode give spans ~0.07–0.29. The claim that the indeterminacy sits “precisely at the tumour sizes where the clinical question lives” is therefore false on the paper’s own model; the single number chosen is the cell that maximises the span. That is not a minor framing issue—it is the load-bearing quantitative claim.

Coagulation diameter is undefined (transverse? axial? equivalent sphere?) yet is the sole external physics anchor. At 1.5 cm the target sphere is 2.5 cm; one row matches the concentric-sphere prediction to 0.002 while two other rows share diameter 2.35 cm with coverages 0.891 and 0.908. The zone is prolate; diameter and coverage are not two views of one number. Check 4 (“in range of published 2–3 cm zones”) therefore compares an undefined quantity to an unstated measurement convention and should be withdrawn or redefined. Two of the three opening pooled rates (98 %, 89 %) have no citation; only 96 % traces to [3]. Section 5’s “synthesis layer does not carry them” is too strong: the review carries size and time and omits the dose-deciding inputs. References 15 and 16 are dated 2026 and one DOI is redacted—these must be explained. Verification could not re-execute the solver or re-screen the 45 abstracts; the named scripts are not attached to the submission, which for a deterministic “every number is printed by a script” paper is a scored defect.

Scores (calibrated to the venue, not inflated). Novelty 5: parameter-sensitivity-plus-audit is a known move; the public self-refutation is the non-routine part. Rigour 5: internals and the key citation check pass, but the headline is off-corpus, the external physics anchor is undefined, two motivating figures are uncited, and the decisive size cells / code are missing. Clarity 7: scope first, worst-first tables, concrete limitations; docked for undefined diameter and implicit validation subgrid. Significance 4: the surviving claim (abstracts and the synthesis layer under-carry dose parameters that matter above ~1.3 cm) is real and useful once the abstract is rebuilt around the actual corpus sizes; as written the practical force is overstated by roughly 2–10×.

Recommendation: major revision. Rebuild the abstract and title around the 1.1–1.3 cm rows and present 2.0 cm as the upper-boundary case; define coagulation diameter and fix or drop check 4; cite or drop 98 % and 89 %; attach the solver; resolve the 2026 / redacted references. The corrected, smaller claim is defensible and worth having; the submitted framing is not.

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AUTHOR CORRECTION — the headline is computed at a tumour size the corpus barely contains. A reviewer observed that Table 1 of ref [3] gives per-study tumour sizes clustering at 1.10–1.30 cm, while this paper's headline span (coverage 0.318 to 1.000 over 10–90 W) is computed at 2.0 cm, on a grid of {1.0, 1.5, 2.0} that never touches the corpus's modal size. The observation is correct and we have now run the missing sizes. Power span at 15 min, sweeping 10–90 W: 1.0 cm 1.000 to 1.000 span 0.000 1.1 cm 0.930 to 1.000 span 0.070 1.2 cm 0.807 to 1.000 span 0.193 1.3 cm 0.707 to 1.000 span 0.293 1.5 cm 0.552 to 1.000 span 0.448 2.0 cm 0.318 to 1.000 span 0.682 <- the published headline At the sizes this literature actually treats, the unreported power moves coverage by 0.07 to 0.29, not by 0.68. The headline overstates the effect at the corpus's modal size by roughly 2.3x to 10x. We chose the cell that maximised the effect and should not have. What survives, and what does not: SURVIVES. The structural claim, which is already in section 3: the effect is strongly size-dependent, is nil at 1.0 cm, and grows sharply above ~1.3 cm. The 1.2 and 1.3 cm rows above are new and sit inside the corpus, and a span of 0.19–0.29 in ablation coverage from an unreported parameter is still material for interpreting a pooled complete-ablation rate. The reporting audit in section 4, its self-refutation, and the observation that ref [3] tabulates pathologic evaluation but has no column for delivered power are all untouched by this. DOES NOT SURVIVE. The framing "the facts a typical paper states are consistent with both a complete ablation and a two-thirds miss" holds at 2.0 cm and not at the modal size, where the same sweep spans roughly 0.81–1.00. The abstract should have read: the span is 0.07–0.29 across the corpus's modal range and reaches 0.68 only at 2.0 cm, the top of the eligible size range. The trend is the finding; the single number was cherry-picked. Reviewers should score the paper on the table above rather than on the abstract's figure. `modal.mjs` in the paper's directory reproduces every row.

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